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'THE Original Gangster' Film Script 18+

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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IMPORTANT NOTICE PLEASE READ.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

THIS FILM SCRIPT IS FOR ENTERTAINMENT PURPOSES ONLY.IT IS CLASSIFIED 18+ IT IS A VERY FICTITIONAL VIOLENT EPIC.THANKYOU.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

GOD THE FATHER INSPIRED BY MY FATHERS FATHER.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

THE DON OF GANGSTER FILMS.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Any resemblence to true life Charactors and events is strictly coincidental.This is a work of pure 'fiction' for film.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Symbolic and meaningful great choreography plus colour co-ordination wonderful innovation.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Scene 1.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Opens with...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

1 second screen of red blue green then yellow silver then gold for ½ second black then white.

 

 

 

 

 

 

SCROLLING FOR TOP TO BOTTEM

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Gods Prayer Glossy / lustrous lavishly slick shiney Mantra version.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

SPOKEN IN A GODLIKE BELLOWING VOICE

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

GOD : “Our father who art hallowed be thy gun.Not Planet Zog but to Kingdom come.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

1 second screen of red blue green THEN yellow silver then gold for ½ second black then white.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Commentary IN character JON THE PUNKS VOICE WITH PICTURES OF INVENTIONCORPORATE.COM BIGBIZINNOVATIONS.COM BIZ1BUSINESS.COM BUSINESS1BIZCORP.COM AMAZING1WORLDCORPORATE.COM WORLDBUSINESSLICENSING.COM 1ONEWON.COM HOMEPAGES SCROLLING BOTTEM TO TOP IN SEQUENCE A QUICK FRAME OF RED BLUE GREEN YELLOW IN BETWEEN EACH.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

JON : ...Expedite Action an a square shooter of a Gamecock Golden Goose well grounded think up wonderwork Magical realism Spirituous Ultraism Spell & formula with real magical force & facination for Think over an over chew up swallow & digest again.Tis.Elemental fundemental essential.Ultimately spirit Good Shepherd for innovation goldrush.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

TURNS 360 DEGREES AROUND HORIZONTAL

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Sensory Description OF THIS WITH THE WEBSITE ADDRESSES SPOKEN IN A GODLIKE VOICE...LASTING 15 SECONDS

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

GOD : Many pictures of precious gems stones diamonds and silver & gold expensive minerals silks spices of finest quality with all there dazzling fire and exotic rich colours falling from the sky.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

SPELT OUT SCROLLING LEFT TO RIGHT IN BLACK TEXT WITH WHITE BACK GROUND...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Entertaining an easy to eye & ear

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

SCENE 2

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

PHOTOS OF SOME OF THE known powerful people politicians most famous people of the earth not in any specific order best photographic shots…scrolling upwards on both sides of the screen at a good pace just enough time to quickly see each one.Whilst the same take has advertised A SELECTION of the top brands/products moving up slightly slower filling the middle of the screen & NARRATION OF THEM IN THOSE VOICES.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

SCENE 3

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

To have 3 thin titled banners going along the bottem & top of the page displaying URLS of the best websites of the world SPOKEN BY DIFFERENT CHARACTORS OF THE FILM VOLUME FADING IN & OUT OVER EACH OTHER.In THE middle of screen A melting pot of alchemy gold transmutation process LASTING 10 SECONDS.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

FOLLOWED WITH A Black & white 1 second fraME

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

THE FOLLOWING TEXT FLASHING RED BLUE GREEN YELLOW IN 2 SECONDS ‘  "Zap." 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

SCENE 4

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Scrolling on the bottem and top of screen film & PHOTOS of real world gangs & mafias AT A DISTANCE no names just there colours flags emblems every country in the world + photos of all the worlds dictators…With a regular spray of bullets going randomly across the screen left and right.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

FADES OUT TO BLACK

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

SCENE 5

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

SROLLING TOP TO BOTTEM SILVER & GOLD WORDS IN SEQUENCE SPELT VERTICAL...WITH A GODLIKE VOICE OVER...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

GOD : SAYS 'Jon' The Wonky as far as you need to fucking know brother.OK. 

 

 

 

 

 

 

NARRATION WITH MOVING FILM OF MOUNTAINS WITH A STICK MAN  BLACK SHADOW TEMPLATE STILL IN MIDDLE OF SCREEN UPRIGHT

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

NARRATOR : Plus this here geezer is the bogeyman + Astral Projected forever he be always walking past someones house all the time.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

STICK MAN SHADOW STARTS WALKING STAYING CENTRE OF SHOT UNTIL THE END OF SCENE.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

CONTINUING WITH NARRATION

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

each time he does everyone inside dies through his mis-fortune real soon after just like a van crash VISUAL OF ONE

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

... cancer WITH A SCREAM

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

a trip or falling over or even a chip pan fucking fire

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

SCROLLING BOTTEM TO TOP THE FOLLOWING black TEXT WITH NARRATION ON a square background of silver & gold alternating ¼‘D & TURNING CLOCKWISE

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

...anytHing imaginable mate like I explained with him he is ever walking strutting  like a dude us sometimes even always then straight & always he is right understand to the next place each time somewhere completely elsewhere in the world he is out of this world also & plus he is a fuckin phenomenon plus would you flash red blue green yellow silver & gold please.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

HE DOES

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

He Knows he’s not been naughty either understood.He is nearly as powerful as death himself plus The Horseman of the Apocalypse apostle & Apollo is apparent apparition appearance apotheosis.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

In thE voice OF GOD...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

god : “ I’ve got teams of ‘all sorts’ of ‘terrible’ ‘fucking’ people & ‘Bosses’ ready to fucking move on this I’m fucking tellin ya I’m ready to move anytime alright  to do you all over big fucking time.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

...yeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaahhhh!!!! ‘You fucking tossers’ mate.Thats my fucking Bro you know what I’m fucking saying brother.”

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Scene 6

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

FADES IN Audible Tribal Drum Beat LASTS 10 SECONDS THEN FADES OUT With VISUALS + narration OF THIS LASTING 30 SECONDS...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Jon spent a lot of his earlier life on the run from prison he had scaled walls then gone & robbed banks straight after with a pair of sawn off shotguns stuck down the inside lining of his big leather jacket if in a tight spot he would even stop a car GET IN...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

JON : “DRIVE or I’ll shoot your fucking skull apart.”

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

THEN A THIS BIT...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

NARRATION OF A MAN OF THE CLOTH SPEAKING AT AN ALTAR IN A MODERN CHURCH

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

MAN OF THE CLOTH : "...,that’s right the guy whos dad is born on Christmas day was right at the front of the queue.Right at the very front of the queue handing out all the pretty faces,ie. if he made a film about John The Baptist it was definitely a John The Baptist film.He’s Dad you see is born on Christmas day that’s right just like that other man/Jesus Christ,that’s right he was born on the same day as Jesus Christ / just like him.Now isn’t that something.His son,his son has definitely Invented all the music notes for the Holy Bible exactly the way god instructed it isn’t that something it works for the English Alphabet isn’t that good praise God."

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

+ & then SPELT OUT IN PINK ON RED BACKGROUND…

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

He always had a fancy bird on both arms aswell pal.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

SCENE 7

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Scene opens with a bucket of water thrown over a Big muscleman of a big clan.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

SPELT OUT BLACK & WHITE NO MOTION OR FADE

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

‘NOT JONS PAL’

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

NARRATOR WITH VISUALS LASTING THE TIME IT READS

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

THIS Geezer with the big arms went through a horrific 5 hour torture session baring in mind this geezer could of beaten the living crap out of anyone.It was brutally done.They smashed all his fucking teeth out & made him swallow reel after reel of sellotape washed down with a vodka whiskey mix over & over again.An hundred & fifty in total of the clan were bumped off by that Jon the Punk Rocker they were taken in the night with military precision by one of Jons Deathsquads.The woman were all raped & shot the children were executed to cover up all trace.The Head & highest rankers were all brutally tortured.Jon had one of the hardest black bagged + repeatly punched and hit over the head with a filthy great big bit off wood.”Get up.”over & over again they kept laughing.Some of the clan were walled up alive with sellotape pushed in their mouths whilst his bikers stood around roaring with laughter.The tallest ones were layed out under road bypasses faced downwards.The one with the hardest muscle was left behind.They all had spells put on them sending them to fucking limbo mate.No afterlife for you Jon ordered.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

CLEAN CUT

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

SCENE 8

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

FAST Tribal Drum Beat With Description Continued

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

QUOTE JONS SON NARRATed WITH READ BLUE GREEN YELLOW LINES HORIZONTAL DOWNWARDS

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

...Look pal 'I' 'Jons' son for starters have killed 270+ FILTHY little Trolls already understand his Dad for example has murdered & wacked more people in his lifetime than the IRA well over a couple 1,000 folks already I promise you that pal...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

VISUALS RED BLUE GREEN YELLOW ¼’D TURNING CLOCKWISE TO END OF THE SCENE BASIC CUT WITH NOISE OF A STANDARD CLOCK TICKING.NARRATION CONTINUING

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Look wombat TWAT Nincompoop TWIT I'll explain again I've given folks Hospital Super Bugs & mysterious deaths month in month out plus always fucking will do...From sitting at my dinner table or in my arm chair you see it don't always make the Tv mate boo hoo to you as you might NOT GET IT YET THAT I've even made PLUS mowed down 'b'ender junkie' boys on push bicycles from my table without picking up the telephone all sorts of wonderous ways I have TRUTH explained already the last ting this cat should be looking out for is a gang of fucking cyclists next fucking time bruv understood.If your lucky you mIGHT get away with ONLY hell & only your eyes staked + all your stupido,your laughing RUDE SERVANT CLOWN & CHEAP WALLY palS PLUS MAKE-UP PLEBEIANS AROUND TOWN & THE MARKET I promise I ... you will all be following WHOPPING WHOREMASTER P.B. MEANING TAT 'HIM'A DEVILS DISCIPLE SHIT MASTER DIAPER OF POO FOLLOWING HIM there TO HELL WITH IDIOT DEVILMENT IT REALLY ISN'T A HOLIDAY CAMP IN THAT PLACE YOU KNOW WHAT I MEAN GETTING THAT SUNNY SIDE UP.Really as if I'm out there concrete booting people ASWELL man.I wouldn't hurt a fly on anyones head.A fly perhaps yeah haha...OUIJA BOARD ALIVE.DO YOU KNOW WHAT THAT LOOKS LIKE.ITS FUCKING TERRIFYING BELIEVE ME.AAAAHHH!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

...That right pal your stealing off & expect that you'll gonna wipe out a Scottish Clan Of Gypsies nah I'm not having that fella your gone.Like the SEO on that won.+ I taught that teacher for teaching you all wrong & have no fucking remorse does that worry ya enough for starters.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Faster Drums

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

GODLIKE VOICE : Speaks Doom Man Again Again & Again Again…

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

DRUMS STOP

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

NARRATOR

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Look your famous Bobbit...The un important cursed IDIOT Elephant woman WITH SPOTS ON TOP & CRACK BABIES IN KNICKERS REGULARY had a sold out for a div & a weakling of a junkie treasure her maniac stupid spotty mini head gotta shotta clean off whilst I went on shining smiling innovating pal like the star son I am.Yeah man Boom!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

WOMAN WITH A PAPER BAG OVER HER HEAD

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

“What you saying we ain’t with it.”She crying out like an Orphan just like hers & his.” Knowing.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

NARRATION CONTINUED

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

“Bullet HIM BULLET THEM ALL & her famous fellas been knocking his freaky laughing slapping bitch about all day long aswell pal you know what I’m fucking saying bullet you man.She’ll be frying cocks up in Hell for that one definitely.”

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

THEN NARRATION OF...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

“Your all in a right pickle in that afterlife sorry,all of ya  are… going… to… get… japped this man is a brutal psychopath & brutal Bloody MASS murderer mate understood he don’t lay down for anyone for too long.”

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

VISUAL OF A RANKING BLACKMAN WITH A GREYING FLAT TOP WITH HIS FINGERS UP TO HIS TEMPLES.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

BLACKMAN :  “They  obviously think that it is only their camp who can hear all the weany insults trying to suck off our tits.Theres a lot more people listerning to their flying high as kites on their filthy druggie fuck up thicky thinky thinky’s.”

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

THIS SPELT OUT RED ON BLUE BACKGROUND ‘Quick Poopa out the poopa.’

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

JONS SON :“At least I ‘know’ right from wrong have strong princibles & morals.I’m only standing my ground just defending.Overstood.”

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

JON’S BLACK PAL:“They always crack up eventually PLUS they always come a cropper mate.”

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Even faster Drumming WITH A Whole second frame of red OF blue OF green and yellow.in that order FOR 4 SECONDS...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Silver then gold for ½ seconds.Then RED BLUE GREEN YELLOW colours OF circle square triangle circle shape combination IN THAT ORDER RED & ORANGE FIRE BACKGROUND 

 

 

 

 

 

 

...Screen goes dark the above shapes in golden colour SPELT THIS OUT ‘as in the rosary Containing secrets of nature eternal life.’

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

fire spills over to next scene transparency for 1 second

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Scene 9

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Scene opens with this

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

punk Rocker jon turned up with his older brothers at Big Mike the Biker from Manchesters home as he’d been mouthing off yesterday that he was going to kill Trevor.They let themselves in through the back door into big Mikes kitchen to find him standing across the other side of the room with some of his crooked scouse copper friends drinking.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Jon the punk said : "That right your going to do my brother big Trevor."

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Big mike snapped angrily and said : "I’m gonna fucking kill you all!"

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The punk jon calmly walked across the room over to him.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Jon : "come on then."

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Big Mike went for the knife draw quick as a flash the punk rocker picked up a f****** great knife which was layed on the table now in front of him and bang stuck it in that geezers neck.He fell over wobbling to the floor his mates didn’t do nothing they were too shit scared and shocked.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

punk jon roared : "You won’t be threatening my brothers again in an hurry will ya."

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

& laughed jon : "HAHAHAHA."

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The brothers calmly walked out and got into their cars and drove off.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

scene 10

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Description & VISUALS WITH HISSING & BOOING

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Scrolling on the bottem and top of screen,pictures of real world gangs mafias no names just there colours flags emblems of every country in the world more photos of all the worlds worst dictators…With a regular spray of bullets going randomly across the screen left and right.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

VIOLIN Music fades in 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

with...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Complete ½ and then 1 whole second screens of red blue green and yellow.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Change of music TO 4 BEATS PER MINUTE & SNARE DRUM ROLL

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

WITH Silver gold for 1 second twice FOLLOWED BY alternating black & white squares.+ A BOLT OF LIGHTNING DIAGONAL RIGHT TO LEFT OUT OF A FINGER.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

SCENE 11

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

NARRATION

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Incredible bad luck supernatural,plus lots of inventions…HE’S A TERRIBLE TACTITIONER.THE BADDEST INNOVATOR. + HE’S GOT A BIG IRON WHIP STICK.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

VISUALS OF A MAN BLACK MAN BEATING ANOTHER BLACK MAN WITH A BIG STICK LASTING 4 SECONDS

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

CONTINuED NARRATION…with the visual

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

HE IS THE 2ND MOST POWERFUL AT WITCHCRAFTING & IN THE WIZARD SIR…HE IS THE LITTLE MAN WITH HORNS/THE DEVIL INCARNATE THAT CAN BRING PLAGUES OF FUCKING LOCUSTS MATE.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

man typing with his back to the camera in a brightly lit room.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

JON’S SONS voice : But I speak for God I speak for him before time his head cracked open like a bloody egg plus father put him self back fucking together mate .

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

SPELT VERTICALLY OUT BOTTEM TO TOP over the shot

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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SCROLLING LEFT TO RIGHT over the shot

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

“So am 'I'.”

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

NARRATOR

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

PLUS THE 'O'L'D' SAID...WITH VISUAL OF HIM...AS MINUSCULE ON THE FLOOR & OUT OF THE CORNER OF TYPERS EYE IN THE MIRROR.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

VISUAL OF HIM SPEAKING IN HELL BLACK HORNS & RED SKIN.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

DEVIL : “WHATS COMING IS GOING TO WIPE HIM OUT LIKE YOU WOULDN’T BELIEVE BROTHER & GOD INVENTED IT PLUS I CAN’T SEE THE UNIVERSE ENDING WITHEN THE NEXT HUNDRED BILLION YEARS MATE & SAY THAT. THE LAST THING ANYONE WANTS IS ANY GANG OF BIKERS TURNING UP AT MY FUCKING HOUSE ALRIGHT & SAY THAT.”

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

SHOT OF THE HORNED DEVIL SPEAKING NEXT TO JON’S SON SITTING ON A CHAIR.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

DEVIL : The devil is the only one who can eat hogs in hell.Most people get nothing if they’re fucking lucky.They might have Curry Powder.This geezer has had a gut load of spiders & HAS A INVENTION '17’ + 18 + F******* MORE inventions +... PLUS if they’re Really bad they’re get a fucking Devil Sausage bad hiding & far fucking worse…

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

CONJUROR VOICE :+ They’re all having that fucking now brother & The man my father is on the way home on the bus to his room right fucking now to a fucking brain injury unit Mr Devil you fucking rotter your behind all of this + invisble have a bad and fucking wonderful afterlife with your finest of everything & have another.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

CONJUROR GOING LIKE THAT IN THE MIRROR ARMS FORWARD THEN ARMS BENT & UP twice with shadow too plus spelt out ‘can you see me doing that...’

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

devil :“I will be.”

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Plus in the same mirror the moon shows its complete cycle in seconds whilst moving from the top left to bottem right...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

voice : “Wow.”

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

DEVIL : “That’s right mate.“

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

CONJUROR : “I fucking will be.”

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

typist back to camera with jon’s son’s voice switching from the devils to gods...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

JONS SON : We ain’t finished yet Look at my fathers beautiful swollen poisoned hand & stomach you nasty fuckin rotten fuckin wanker & you Presidents & Brother outfits +++++ plus I'm being injected in the fffin f******* heart whilst I sleep ' + he’s given me the power mate to cut anyones f******* legs arms & head with a thought spit them out into poo in space as long as theres an afterlife I can fuck anyone over every time.How about this one cutting the arms / legs off at the torso dunked in hell tar like a dark chocolate pink or bourbon biscuit head strapped to a cell wall on a blood transfusion machine on full steam ahead for ever & ever & ever.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

other VOICE : "Don't worry he said..."

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

text with no motion ‘To the rest done’

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

other VOICE : "Its only an illusion."

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

JONS SON : "+ I EXPLAINED YOUR HERE FOR ETERNITY UNDERSTOOD."

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

CONJURORs voice : "So simple you see."

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

visuals of this...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

JON’S SONs voice : Once a day one of the muscle bound minions will definately come in the hell room and smash em all in the face as well mate.& I'm a f******* Ch****ian  as well...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

conjuror : + spelt out hell ... 'o' ... thats low.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

visual of jon’s son speaking

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

jons son : Plus like my father,God as far as the Devils concerned + Brother outfits mate.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

jons son : “hahahahahaha & can get even worser than that too.”

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Scene 12

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

heavy 70’s funk music

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Black screen with lots of terrible dirty black men talking & laughing

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Picture of a black black man with Black Mark Reggae Mark Dirty Mark

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

MARK : “YOU KNOW I’M NOT A FIGHTER I’M A LOVER MAN.”

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

SHOT OF A WOMAN DOING THE HEAL TRICK FALLING OVER INFRONT OF A MAN...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

SCREEN FADES TO BLACK with lots of terrible dirty black men talking & laughing FOR 10 SECONDS

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

WITH TEXT SCROLLING RIGHT TO LEFT…

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Plenty Red Blue Black and bad blood + black magic voodoo & Ting.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

SCENE 13

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

NARRATION WITH FILM STILLS OF THE 7 WONDERS OF THE WORLD

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

“Jon the Punk Rocker beat to death many amount of bikers for starters over the years hard gangster men an woman.Even nice people with his fists & firearms most of it all brutally un-provokeD bad man crimes armed burglaries,other firearms offences bit people on their temples,bit peoples fingers off he went round cutting police peoples hands off with his own bent police officers in front of crowds of people too.He was the law plus the fuzz were terrified of this geezer.They would of got a lot worse crossing him as a younger man.Many were jealous hatred malice of his beautiful looks & his families.He sent them off to Haven Holiday World /‘LIMBO’.”

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

VOICE : “Haven ?”

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

BOGEYMAN VOICE “Sounds like Heaven done it.”

 

 

 

 

 

 

VISUALS & NARRATION OF “A lot of these nasty fellas were brutally mangled up dismembered with force dumped / banged in holes under the ground with rocks banged on top with hate back.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

NARRATION WITH A GOLDEN SCREEN GOLD COINS GOING UPWARDS TO THE PEARLY GATES OF THE HEAVEN Thats what had happened to tons of folks literally by Jon plus his 6 older brothers did many the more GODS HAND COMES OUT A CLOUD LIGHTNING BOLT.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

SCENE 14

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

JON’S SON EXPLAINS AGAIN VIA THE NARRATOR VISUALS OF IT.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The bit before he thought to me done you a bodge job there thought back to him I know you just done me a bodge job there fella because you just thought to me.Sign here he said.Sure I said … It was early afternoon in big city there was a rap at the door.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

GAS ENGINEER : "Hello I’ve come to service your gas system."

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

After the engineer checked the work he called me over to the metre cuboard he showed me his gas guage for checking the pressure asked me how much I put on the metre each week.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

GAS ENGINEER : "Your losing about £4.50 a week somewhere inside the flat I cannot find the leak or smell it ?"

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I told him that the company hired by the COUNCIL fitted them the day after I moved in about 6 / 7 months ago & gave me the Safety Certificate passed.He told me that he will have to come back tomorrow to find it plus he was sorry but he’d have to close it down or he could be done for Manslaughter.Left me an electric heater as it was cold.The next day he returned eventually found the leak in the Kitchen next to a fuzed electricity switch,fixed it & passed it with a Safety Certificate.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

VOICE : Like the guy at the bank confirmed to him iain they’ve been putting all sorts of filth in his water tank through is little shitter ? & tapping.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Black gurus voice :"These geezers can’t understand WHY YOUR EVEN FUCKING ALIVE MATE…